Inkitt
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Intriguing & looking forward to reading more.

"I really like this story thus far. Looking forward to further updates 😁"

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Great

"Great story so far."

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Different!

"I loved the way it started, would have liked a backstory on who these beings were..more about their world..the power that they had..overall it was a really fun read..but...it ended in the middle of a scene...would love to see you add a part 2..in fact I need this...Good work...keep writing.."

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Omg

"I still don't know what to feel about this... "

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