This is great

"it literally immerses me in the world of naruto. the story corresponds perfectly to the original so it is not even noticeable to a person who has never seen the anime of manga that she wasn't part of the original story. I like how yue has a backstory that isn't another ten tails beast rerun. P.S are yue and naruto going to fall in love?"

"For Life and Death"

"You are a good Story teller. I enjoyed the inner action of the students soon to pass their test to become ninja's. The Story was a bit confusing at times, but the ending summed up the moments of confusion. I suggest you edit your writing before submitting for grammar and punctuation. Also, mixing languages can cause confusion, to the reader, who does not understand Japanese or vice versa, English.. Be that as it may, this is your story, and you have a good start on finishing it............eat some ramin before you begin........just kidding...........good work, this story should be a winner............. william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive..............please Review........."

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