Eager for more!

"I am enjoying this story so far! I think you've set up a lot of mystery and intrigue - so far, you've revealed very little which is a great way to hook in your readers! I also feel like so far, it's been a unique take on the vampire/mate story which is nice to see. You set the scene really well with strong descriptions in the first chapter - I'd love to see more of that! If I had to give one minor critique, I'd suggest including a few more dialogue tags so it's clear who's speaking (for example, in chapter 2). Keep it up, can't wait for more:)"