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VENT by Mimzy11

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Summary

A collection of wild, unfiltered thoughts.....A place to find something that you may not know that you have been looking for!

Genre
Poetry,Other
Author
Mimzy11
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
6
Rating
4.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

FIREFLY

Sometimes I feel like a firefly.

Carefree, wild....set apart from all other creatures of the night.

My bright light defeats the surrounding darkness and I feel powerful.

Every night I blend in seamlessly watching the flickering street lights, city lights and of course the stars.

It makes me feel like I’m not alone on this earth. I feel the warmth of the night... The moonlight seeps through my skin and I know that I’m blessed.

But ... To be a firefly at day...

I can assure you nothing feels more lonely and hopeless.

You become invisible under the beautiful rays of sunshine.

I swear...if you don’t look close enough you’d think I was never here.

It’s funny how my magnificence is stripped away and I am once again all alone Barely noticeable in a room full of people.

That’s why I am forced to believe that even mother nature kinda...sorta loves me for she only allows me to shine in the presence of her darkness

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My favorite line in this poem is "the moonlight seeps through my skin and I know I'm blessed." I get that this is a free verse poem, but it would have much more weight with a different form!

7 years
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