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Broken Trust

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Summary

Imagine having only one person who actually cares and supports you completely disappears from you life and left you to suffer from the cruel world. This book is about a girl named Ash short for Ashira and she has no one who cares about her exept her bestfriend Alex, but when he suddenly dissappears Ash is left to survive on her own.

Genre
Mystery,Action
Author
Miya
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

It was the end of Summer and the beginning of a new year like normal exept her best friend, Alex, was not going to be by my side, because in the middle of summer he randomly disappeared and I was extremely depressed. So now this is going to be our first time going to school without him or anybody by my side.

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Ash get your lazy butt up before you end up late to school. I heard my mom yell from downstairs. Great she didn't sound to sober so I guess I have to sneak out the house to get to school.

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A little background information my dad left me when I was 5 and it made my mom severely depressed she started drinking, I get bullied at school, and I get abused by my birthgiver. And as I got older the abuse only got worse but Alex was always there to help me through, but ever since his disappearance I was almost never home.

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I put on a long red hoodie and some leggings, then I rushed downstairs, took an apple from the kitchen, ran upstairs climbed out the window, hoped on my bike at school. Once I arrived to school I rush to my locker but right as I was about to close my locker it got slammed shut I'd had known it was bound to happen so therefore I was completely unfazed. " Well look at who we have here " The most popular kids in school, the quads. They were good looking and all but the scare the living daylights out of me. They have bullied me since the 6th grade all because my" Dad "had ruined their family because my " Dad " had secretly been dating their mom, hence why I no loner have a dad, and the quads started bullying once they found out why their mom left.

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Are you enjoying my ongoing story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Miya

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