Inkitt
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Oh my my !

"Just into the first chapter and im hooked! I'm so glad you chose to write about a topic like this! Keep going.💕😃💝"

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An engaging read

"The frame narrative sets up an atmosphere of longing, as the narrator reminisces while inviting the reader to do the same. The story makes efficient use of pacing, with the internal monologue creating tension in the early chapters. There were a few typos here and there; though the ones present in the text messages sent between characters make sense since it's a realistic depiction of texting."

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