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The boy in the bubble

"I really like the book so far"

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You’re amazing

"I like the plot of this story and the characters. I think your writing style is good though some proof reading would make the story better. I noticed some grammatical errors. That’s all though. The story is amazing otherwise. "

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Nooo that stupid ending man! Anyway, love this story!

"Honestly beautiful book. I really hope you continue. "

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LOVE 😍

"I love this book I would highly recommend it to people who like gay novels and don't mind a bit of naughty dreaming/thinking I would really appreciate it if you could reread and correct your mistakes it was a little hard to read."

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Beautifully

"I like the way story is progressing so far. I like that it's not moving to fast or to slow, but at just the right pace to keep my interest and attention. I gave it the ratings I did because it's written beautifully, its interesting, the amount of words in each chapter, and the plot."

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A elegiac, vivid and cathartic novel.

"A scrupulously detailed storyline and resemblance of a side Chronicle marked by several personal touches of the Author Nahyome. Indeed it was a constant pleasure and delight to read this extraordinary novel. The overall experience was an exquisite moment, best savored with a nice cup of tea on the bed with eyes rolling at this marvellous story. The ideas, themes, plot and motifs, especially when writing about sensitive topic such as homosexuality, the Author surpassed the excellence of writing style. A perfectly engaged first personage narration and a sublime way of passing very high emotion such as grief and there was an eloquence in arousing catharsis among the readers. It is said that a fine reader can read in between lines of an Author. Well, Nahyome transports the reader in between two invisible lines. It takes us to a world full of love, eroticism and romance but also that of hate, anger, self-loathing, pity, jealousy and gender & sexuality shaming. And the character of Tahjae has particularly touched me and I have been able to relate to a lot of the actions, and the position of Tahjae's mother is very sentient and has eventually made me cry. I would have loved to live in the world of Tahjae. Although, the Author could have put some more effort into the delivery of the language as the grammar seriously need some improvement. And I am utterly unsatisfied and disappointed that this book is incomplete! Even if I understand the Author's Note, but still. This book is a fruit of prodigy, a fiction that should be ranked to the same level as Frankenstein( a pioneer in fiction writing) cannot stand to rest incomplete, an amazement of such skillful and rich novel should not stay undone. I would request the Author to make haste in the completion of the book so that we are able to savour the delicate impressions and enunciation of ' The boy in the bubble'. I have literally fell in love with this book."

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The Boy in the bubble

" Everything Amazing writing Amazing character "

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Boy in the bubble

"I loved how even after being beaten down he was still able to be there and still love who he wanted too. I loved his mom though like I was she was my mom would make life so much easier "

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":)))))))))))))))))))))))))) whyisthethingtoshortwtf"

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Interesting

"I enjoyed how Tahjae's character slowly developed. It made the story more interesting. I liked the fact that you targeted a current issue in our world. I'm expecting more from you. "

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Great

"Its a really good story i like it"

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Good book

"I do like the subject matter....and i am truly enjoying the book, but small things like obviously they are both from rich families etc alittle on the backgrounds would be nice."

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It's pretty good!

"I am really enjoying this book, I love the story plot so far, and I definitely want to read more. The only thing is that sometimes the grammar is not the best... I'll have to reread some of the sentences to understand, but it doesn't happen often. Maybe a sentence or two a chapter. "

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"Den and then you can do it would have to get it would have to be able too guidance too many people are"

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