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Amazing

"Love it very well written great plot and story line "

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Need some work

"It's s good story, but would be better if the author explained better about Asil`s background - like what's a "Mook", why do he want Bran to kill him. A lot of unexplained things. The teen girl - how is she? That being said - I love the idea and storyline. "

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