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Good Story!

"I really like this story so far. I would recommend this to any My Hero Academia lover out there. It really is an interesting plot of what if Deku never became a hero. I really hope you continue this story because I really enjoy it so far. I think a bit more details here and there would really be helpful in the flow of your story, but do not change anything else. I love it so far!"

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Amazing

"it's amazing how they could keep me interested with so little details witch is my only suggestion i get lost sometime with out proper descriptions but still my fevered story so far."

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I began reading this book, and it's like another variation of another deku villain story I heard, but since it's the beginning I don't really plan to judge it too quickly, hope you surprised me!🖤🕵️

"I didn't really dislike much about it, but more of bringing the Characters alive. Like everyone has different thoughts and speech patterns. You did pretty good on that to me. Your writing and puncure was pretty good, I can't really complain cause I suck at writing, and everything else is totally fine. 🖤🖤🖤"

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