This has potential

"I found this interesting, with the chase through the forest, the mention of a promise, the mysterious uncle who was unwilling to save his niece. It has a lot of potential, so I would encourage you to do more with this story. There are a lot of unanswered questions in this, such as: Why is the werewolf coming after Sophia? What was the promise? Who is Ashley? I think that clarification in these areas would help a lot. Also, chase scenes have a lot of potential to create suspense in the reader. So if you drew that out -- the sounds of the growls from behind, the horrid anticipation of being caught, the tangles of briars and thorns that Sophia has to push through -- I think that you could make this far more chilling. Just a little food for thought. I would love to see what you can do with this story. Good work. Keep writing! <3"