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pls

"right more pls you can't end there"

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:O

"This was simply astonishing. I haven't seen fan fiction this good since I was six! You have made an exceptionally good fan-fic story and I respect you for your creativity and knowledge in the ways of Alagaësia. Your creativity and truthfullness makes me wish this whole thing was real. Hopefully Christopher Paolini will take the fan fiction works into consideration and then create one of the most brilliant masterpeices, aka YOURS. Yours truly, A Rider and a Friend"

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Amazing

"This was amazing!! It's only sad that I didn't find this sooner, but this is extremely AWESOME!!! This was so well written and o felt the same feelings the characters were feeling. And I saw how much pain they've been through and my heart just broke but it was filled with rainbows afterwards. Anyways this was one of the best fics I've ever read."

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