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I really liked Behind Closed Doors
"I liked how the author was able to draw us into the mind of both Elsa and Anna and explain to us how Elsa really felt. It reminds us that Elsa is still human and can be vulnerable sometimes. "
First chapter is good
"As the title states, the first chapter is good. I'm not sure where you're going to go with this after, since the summary only includes Anna's worry about being shut out again, and that's already been resolved. Also, you have quite a few run-on sentences and some dialogue that isn't closed with proper punctuation (excluding quotation marks). The last sentence explains why I gave you a 3 on the technical side of things."
