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Nice
"NFC’s gdefs"
Short, sweet and relatable
"I enjoyed the pace of the writing; it wasn't drawn out or filled with unnecessary descriptions. I think this is a very relatable story for most teenagers and young adults - love, romance and sex never quite live up to the extremely high standards you set in your head. There were a minor typos and spacing issues that can be fixed with a quick edit. Otherwise, thumbs up. PS. I like the design of the cover. "
