What is your opinion?
Well written
"This was a splendid read, I really loved it. If you want a good short story to pass some time, I would definitively recommend this to you."
Excellent, for a short story!
"I must say, this is very well written, even if it's a short story. During the short time I got to know Alden and Theo, I felt as if I known them longer. You have a great way of being descriptive in such details I can very much picture it all. The story was really well pace, the dialogues fit well and didn't drag on. Saw about two minior mistakes, but it didn't distract from the story. Overall, this was a very good short story. Congrats if this was your first. You done a very good job on telling the story you wanted to tell. If you got more stories you want to share, don't be shy to ask me for my opinion, as I will definitely check it out. Keep up the good writing! 👍🏼"
