What is your opinion?
Great story!
"I’m really enjoying this story! I love the style in which it’s written, the way we’re allowed to get to know the characters, and the incorporation of poetry as well is lovely."
Well written!
"The poem is amazing and it adds much to hook the reader! I could feel the emotions of the characters very well! The author has rocked in the writing style! A perfect entertainment... A well written book! "
I love this story!
"I am loving this story so far! The characters are very interesting and I am ready to read more about Derek and Jonathan. I’m excited to see where their relationship with Noelle goes. I like the steam and tension building between the three. The poetry is beautiful and gives life to the story. "
Promising story
"The poem took my heart away. It was amazing. You should write more. The strong initiation hooked me right in. The way you write about the characters, it just leaves me wanting to know them more, make them a little more descriptive. You have a good flow and sense of the plot. Good job. "
Wow
"This is such a great start. I love the character’s seperate personalities and I think this is quite well written. I’d recommend two things: 1. Specify who’s point of view each chapter’s in. 2. Stretch the story out a bit more. I love the fast tempo of it, but I think it would be even better if you take the time to describe each event in detail. In all, I think this is a really good start to your story, and I really hope you keep writing it."
Amazing!
"This story well written. It moves at just the right pace, there is drama, passion, and tension you could cut with a knife. Just fix the odd grammar and typo mistakes, maybe look at the word ordered and paragraph layout and it will be perfect. Maybe add a little bit more description to the characters too. I love the line 'London is different than Los Angeles. It is colder. But for me it is definitely warmer than the icy cold American dream.'"
