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So fine it's very interesting I love it💯💯💯💯

"I loved it😍 It's teleports me to another world.this story is amazing "

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The dark woods

"Omg the oldest sibling got me so need to know what’s happening next !!!!! Love the story so far can’t put it down "

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great

"can’t wait to see more "

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The dark woods

"All I can say is that the person behind all this was her own brother.that was a twist I was not expecting.to even have his own brother torchered."

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Great book

"Amazing story "

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Great!

"I am really enjoying this book and look forward to the updates "

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The Dark Woods

"It's a really good story!!! "

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Good book

"Great book bit long winded"

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Oof so good 🤗✨

" I really liked the book, there was no errors or anything. The writing was perfection. and It had details. I LOVE details. thank you for writing this book"

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The Dark Woods

"Fireeeee literally one of the best books on inkitt"

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The dark woods

"What a fab story loved it, need more need to find out who tried to murder her? What happened to her father and brothers also Damon also what happened between Abbie and ace? Is there more Thankyou 😊"

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Good book

"Cant wait to read the rest of your story. I found it very interesting. Not very many mistakes 5 at most."

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Fun read, sucks you in

"This is so much fun and the more you read the bigger is gets. Give it a go.... It took me a week on bus journeys to get to this point and I. Genuinely frustrated that I can't keep going... "

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Lowkey meee wishasha

"I like the story and the suspense it's giving me. You know i actually didn't want to read it in the first place because of school but then when i read the first chapter i just got curious and wooooowwww i loveee it"

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A little glitchy

"I'm enjoying the story for the most part. It is feeling like a reverse harem not excited about that. A lot of autocorrect errors. Not a huge fan of the main character, a flake for the most part. I feel like a lot of ideas are being crammed into the story. Ronnie is by far my favorite character so far. Many of the story transitions are rushed or don't make sense. I hope all of the many unsaid interpersonal relationships are explained. "

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Very nice story

"Very good story, I like it a lot "

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Abigail

"Exciting demon world. "

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