What is your opinion?
Hallo
"I like this book, a lot, but something is missing. I don't know. Maybe because it is a little short, it is not like a book. We want a little more suspense, you know like, don't be shy put some more.😁"
Just a review
"Everything’s pretty good. The only tip I ahve is that the author slow down. Like it would just be one piece of drama after the other. Don’t take this rudely it’s just advice I will absolutely love this book but, for example the whole seen where they wake up and the girls a vampire and then they fight and he’s pregnant like. The pregnancy was waaaay to quick I mean you don’t have sex and then the next day you realize your pregnant. So if advise she slow down make some more wholesome chapters or scene in between. Maybe do like time skips? Like end a paragraph and then type 3 days later or something?? "
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