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What is your opinion?
Fate entwinged
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Fate is a fickle mistress
"This story is only at the beginning of it journey; however, it shows much merit. Perhaps the plot is unraveled a little to quickly with who Cameron is and the relationship between her and Mark should be a little more tense at first, but it is your story and your vision dear author 👍🏻 Since this is the authors very first story and is yet on the verge to discover his/her own voice there are some grammatical mistakes but nothing to big to disrupt the flow of the words 🤗 The beauty of this app is that you can constantly re-edit. Other than that we shall see where the author takes us with this story🧐 Keep up with good work and do not be discouraged; practice makes it perfect 🥰"
