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What is your opinion?

I like it, just hope it's better than what the summary says.

"I quite like it, and I don't mean to come across rude but I think the plot is a tad boring. But I think that's also good. I liked how you wrote the story in such detail but it also looked good from the big picture too and that it was connected to the summary. But I think you should leave a cliffhanger, and although many of us hate it, it makes us want to know more and read more. I feel a good story coming from this :) (P.S this is my 1st review, so it might be bad O_O >~<)"

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