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Great storyline

"Enjoy the storyline. Highly recommended!"

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I don’t know

"I really love the story. You feel for both characters kind of thrown together. You also wish Layla could regain her sight even for just a minute if not forever."

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Look at me

"So far so good dont want to pit it away"

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,

"I will always remember this book. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."

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Look at me

"I love the book so far! It's amazing the way Layla accepts her situation and the way Elijah is so patient with her! Overall, I LOVE IT!"

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Be confident

"The start is good. I like the ideea and I hope that will be as good in the end like the start. The writing was rough, with especially awkward dialogue, but I thought the premise of the story was brilliant"

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Look at me

"Love the story. Don't like the abusive language."

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Look at me

"The starting is so nice... the tempo ..is set.pls do update fast. The story has a nice suspense. "

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Look at me

"I like how this story goes, I rate 5 stars because I love it so much. Desperate to see how the story goes and how the ending is ."

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Perfect

"Why is it incomplete"

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Loving it

"Loving the story so far!"

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Temptation

"Looking forward to read more to learn how they r going to bond Wishing she can regain her eyesight as well"

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Miss

"Small tiny little layla☺"

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Enjoying it gradually

"Good strong story line"

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Good

"I really like the story line so far. Has a few typos but it's good so far."

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thats

"That's good"

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