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Dean Winchester love in High school
"I like how it went fast, and that the guy confessed to her first. It's an amazing story and i'll like to see more stories like this"
Good idea, but needs a lot of work
"There are a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes that need to be tied up. You should also make the story parts longer. Make them more descriptive, Add more development to Mary's character and to her relationship with Dean as the story goes on. It is a high school romance so don't be afraid to add more fluffy romantic moments, but let the romance build over time."
