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Summary

What happens when a girl has the whole world on her shoulder discovers an unknown Secret and has worst high school experience with a mix romance. But what if I told you that her life turns upside down on her 18 birthday when she discovers a whole new wold that was sworn to be extinct centuries ago This is the story of Sophia Davidson and her life is about to become a lot worse ......... "Oh come on" she says shouting at the vase staring at her directly in the face " you've got to believe" a voice says from behind her hidden in the shadows of the night "Believe in what, that the world is literally relying on me and they don't even know it" throwing my hands up trying to get my point across "or the fact that i this vase in front of me is meant to do something exciting" "Believe In your self and let yourself feel the movement ,let it all come back to you" with that he begins to become one with the darkness once again

Genre
Romance,Other
Author
Grace
Status
Complete
Chapters
34
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

The world did not end in a bang, or a whisper But rather one scream at a time. The trees swaying Violently the wind swaying harsher than possible


“Look you don’t have to do this”


“Why not why shouldn’t I kill you right here right Now” her eyes wondered around the forest the wind fully in her control. The moon barley visible through the trees, A small orb on white light hives just above her palm


“Why do you want me I have nothing to do with you. I gave you what you wanted take it and go” the wind suddenly got more angry, matching the expression on the woman’s face


“Oh you are a stupid girl aren’t you my little niece. “ silence filled the area, the wind suddenly stopping “ I don’t care about that” the ball in her palm falling to the ground smashing into pieces


Screams filled the air as pain shot across her body the loss of the magic leaving an empty mark on her skin. The moon light shining down onto the crippled body. barely breathing. the woman stared at the body one last time before walking away into the darkness leaving no trace of her behind.


“Amelia?!” The frantic voice searching the area the sound of his foot steps filling the silence


“I'm sorry Daniel, I love you" her eyes began to droop her breathing really shallow her body slowly giving up


“You’re ok , i love you ,forever” his voice coming out quickly he tears falling down his face quickly the facade he so long tried to hold, the strong fearless king broke”stay awake please” his voice shallow


Several foot steps filled the air soldiers crowing around the scene a medic and her equipment breaking through the crowd bending over the queen trying to keep her alive.


“ I need space! “ the woman shouted out .the crowd backing of slightly concerned on whether the queen will make it.


More medics gather around. The voices shall but quick everyone understanding what to do. The moon shining down giving them give them the light needed to see the pale face of the young queen. Her body limp as they lift her up onto a bed to take her to the castle fro treatment. Her life hanging on the edge of death.


Not one person moved until the car disappeared from sight the ball behind them all leaking white vapour into the air the ball slowly coming back together a silhouette of a woman standing a few meters behind .


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author

Hi, Dreame is hosting a Royal Romance Writing Contest from April 28 to September 30, 2021, with a prize pool of $100,000 and a chance for the winner to win $40,000!
In addition, there are luxury prizes such as an iPhone, iPad, Kindle Paperwhite, Audio-Technica, and more.
You are welcome to enter the contest! For more details, please visit Dreame's website or contact us at [email protected].

5 years

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