Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

I'm not professional so I will say what's on my opinion

"The plot was incredible and the story was btilliant. However, there are some error and need improvement. I do love it.❣"

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I'm not professional so I will say what's on my opinion

"The plot was incredible and the story was btilliant. However, there are some error and need improvement. I do love it.❣"

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I'm not professional so I will say what's on my opinion

"The plot was incredible and the story was btilliant. However, there are some error and need improvement. I do love it.❣"

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Wonderful work!

"I fell for the author, and definitely for the book. Wonderfully written piece of art. For a first time author, you surely nailed it! I just loved this book, full of emotions, love, feelings, plots, everything. And Ashton, I fell for him too. Keep writing and don't stop. much love❤️❤️"

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Gang wars

"It was awesome to read about how rich Ashton is. Bit confusing about about the other people trying to kill him ."

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Jumpy ride

"The story was a rollercoaster n I enjoyed it. Though the story seems to be lacking the systemic flaws between the characters n the plot seems to be little rushy. But overall you did an impressive work in your first book I should say that. "

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I'm a bit picky

"Good story overall. Rich man who can do whatever he wants. But all the errors breaks the pacing."

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