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Well written!

"I have mixed feeling with this story. I want a happy ending for both of them. But the author already warns us that this is not a romance story. Author is gifted with great writing and this story is one of a kind. Honestly, I love the story even thought it is a very disturbing and dark. I would recommend those who would want to give a break from typical love story to read this. I hope there is sequel because I would love to indulge more. "

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love this book so much

"when my friends ask me what types of book I read I just say romance bc how the hell am I gonna tell them this is the shit I like to read. Love your books this is one of the best books I've ever read"

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Torin & Sagel

"You're not kidding when you said you write dark and disturbing content.. But all that I've read is good and I want more of Torin & Sagel's story. I wonder if they can get a HEA ending after the baby? I know it will be highly unlikely with what she's been through with Torin but why not right?"

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A Beautiful Evil

"OMFG......you are a great writer. I really loved your story, right from the beginning. What a sick fuck Torrin is. I had a feeling it wasn't going to be a happy ending. But your story is great. I laughed, cried was disgusted and also turned on. 🔥🔥🔥🔥 I can't wait to check out your other works. Thanks for having your story on this app. "

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Fascinating dark story

"This book was well done kept me captivated and and my toes the whole time. Felt so sorry for Sagel throughout the entire book and I mean entire book. If only she didn’t have to go to the bathroom. Torin is certainly psychotic but a genius and I’m sure there are men like that out there. At the same time, I’m Sorry that the story ended but it is what it is."

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amazing.

"this was dark and incredible, thank you for sharing"

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literally has goosebumps while reading this

"its was an amazing novel.... although i pray that no man like torin exists in this world.... or else it would be so scary..... i feel sorry for sagel.... overall the novel gave a very dangerous vibe and when i read their were moment when i feel disgusted but that's what made this novel so different."

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Beautiful Evil

"WOW WOW WOW!!!! I loved this story, I was pulled in to the story so deeply since she met Torin that I couldn't stop reading. Hopefully you will have more stories like this coming our way!"

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Kept my attention for hours!

"Oh my god, this was such an amazing story, I couldn't stop reading it! I didn't want it to end, I hope there will be a second book coming soon. Even though most likely if Sagel does have that baby and it's a boy, the cycle will continue just like Torin and his father, but I would love to read about it, I want to know what happens when Sagel finds out that she is still pregnant! I stumbled upon this page just searching up on google horror stories I can read online and I am so glad I picked this story to read. I get bored easily but this story captured me right away from the very start. I applaud the author and if you ever do make a second book and publish it, I will definitely buy the book to support your craft."

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The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]

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A beautiful evil

"This is one of most saddest stories I have read the main character is so fucked up "

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Escaped

"I like this book extremely, it has adult content, so I highly recommend it for audiences of 20 an older who can appreciate its intense content. "

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Dark, intriguing

"The novel is a bit dark, but the dynamic between the characters is intriguing. "

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Great book

"Brilliant thrilling read, hoping for a sequel "

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Beautiful evil

"Loved the book hope there is a follow up . "

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Page turner!

"I absolutely love this author and her work. This story is an amazing read. Very intense, and full of surprises and suspense. I highly recommend this story and anything else she writes to anyone into dark themes. "

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A beautiful devil

"Very unique story, you will hate, you will love, you will hope. A must read if you are tired of books that always ends well. This story will make you ask for more. Kudos to you author."

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No Romance!

"Crazy book. I couldn't stop reading"

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Awesome!!!

"100% recommended...loved it....and the best part is that there's no stockholm syndrome in it...."

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A beautiful evil

"I loved the plot...torine is one hell of a character,I love him. The novel is breathtaking and kept me glued to it. Is there a continuation of the novel,I want more❤️"

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