Inkitt
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infires man

"this story is short? yes but sweet? definitely!this was just a perfect short story for me because I am currently studying for my finals and every now and then I like reading a short story that requires short time but boosts up your mood a lot. Author-nim you nice keep going! your fangirl from Egypt."

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Amazing so far!

"I really liked the characters and i'm definitely hooked the plot...its sad as well as happy & exciting when it needs to be and i definitely wanna why hobi did that... Overall the book looks quite good so far, just some grammatical mistakes which can be fixed. Waiting for more. Fighting!"

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Good so far!

"To be honest, I loved the plot and twists of the story. You've given the readers mixed emotions as sad as well as happy for Y/N at the same time. Seems like a lot of drama going to happen in there. The book is going good as of yet but it will be all the more better if you give it a re-read and editing and I've already mentioned in the comments about where and about the punctuation and some words. Besides that, You are a great writer and do not stop! 🤗"

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Love It!

"I'm honestly not that big of a Member X Y/N fanfiction person but once I started reading I felt trapped! I just had to keep reading. You did a great job at hooking the reader's attention and I'm really looking forward to everything else you do. Thank you so much!"

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