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Great but insist you to continue further am waiting. Love from India Gujarat

"Its great and i insist you to continue writing Love from india gujarat"

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Belonging

"Great story, I really am enjoying this authors imagination, love the characters, story line, action plot. I am laughing at the humor and grinning at her sexual frustration. I can't believe the Russian only took her on a date. I hope it is finished and not discontinued without a great ending.. I hope that word in the title doesn't stop people from reading this as it is a very good offering.. lol"

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Love this

"so in love with this book can wait for updates but take your time. Love Raphael and Zoey. "

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Beautifully made!

"Like this novel so much. The feisty, principled, outgoing & funny Zoey. Well, Dear Apple, you’ve got a real talent, a natural and artistic one! And for the hundreds of novels I read, I got to say this fascinates me soo much coz the plot is so unique compared to the usual and common mafia stories. I would love it best if you will finish this wonderful creation of yours. Kudos to you Dear Author!❤️"

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Hot

"I love this"

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Belonging

"I don’t typically write reviews on here but, I am hooked on this book. I absolutely love it. From the sexual tension to the plot!"

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Belonging

"Love it so far. Would like to know if there's a set schedule for updates, or just as you go? "

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Great book

"Love it, very captivating. Love the characters"

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Lovely

"Lovely story"

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Amazing

"I love this book so much!!! The feelings are amazing and you can really relate. You’re an amazing writer!!"

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It's good so far

"The plot of the story is good so fsr"

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Can it be love

"True love will prevail "

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Belonging

"I can’t wait for the next update."

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💜💜

"O my god I love thisss 💜💜💜💜 Plz keep updating"

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Updates

"Updates first please if possible"

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Idk

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Best read

"Please keep writing I love it and haven't been able to stop."

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Belonging

"I actually love this story these story is interestingl"

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Belonging

"I love this story. The characters are full and well developed, and the feeling of the growing emotional attachment is engaging, I enjoy your writing style.Please continue!"

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Keep up the good work

"So I am loving this book and your writing style. Something that I think could be I guess 'fixed' Is a translation of the Italian and other languages for the people who don't know the language. And I am glad you can add some of the different languages because it draws the audience in more. Overall this is a very good book and we'll written."

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