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Unexpected Love
"This story has a lot of promise. The plot is beautiful but it needs to be developed. Narration and timeline along which the story is told need to be more consistent and balanced. It also needs some editing. The characters are interesting but they all need to be developed. All in all it can be a pleasant read but there’s room for improvement."
Unexpected Love
"A lot of spelling errors. And grammar needs work. However it was easy to get in to, not dry and kept my attention. The ending was very abrupt. "
Oluseye
"Leaving a review after every page is beginning to get tiring"
