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What is your opinion?
Shocking
"Hi... So after reading this story...I have to say wow. However...I find that you are repeating the I, It, If alot. Now, since it's a short story, it was noticeable. What I like about the story is the mystic feeling you give us. The woman certainly is special in your story, no wonder why I think of it as a small piece of uniqueness. This short story is worth it's read."
Interesting turn of events.
"I found the plot of this story very interesting, the descriptions are very good and made you want to know more as well as putting you on edge slightly. It was dark and mysterious and I hope you continue to develop the story."
