His warm hands sneak slowly under the hem of my shirt. Inching it up by going further and further. Fingers are almost ghosting over my skin till he squeezes my waist once. I feel my heart pumping so unbelievable fast. My cheeks so hot, even hotter when I see him smirk down at me. Lifting my hands he removes the shirt and tosses it somewhere. "Tell me when to stop" Its a small whisper before he leans down again.
Writing this story has always brought me so much joy, even though I never actually finished it back then. Recently, nostalgia hit me hard and I felt inspired to return to it and finally complete it properly. Because of that, I rewrote and changed several parts. Some scenes simply needed a fresh touch.
If anyone is interested in the “new” version, including the parts I removed because they were a bit too cringe, I’ll make that version available separately.
22th November 2025
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