Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Just woww

"Just like heaven the chapters are awesome"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Stacey121

"Would really like updates. Miss you. Need more. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Control Me (+18)

"I really like this book hope there will be more chapters!!! Really good storyline."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Control me

"A very fun read. It has a well planned and interesting plot line that is definitely worth spending time on. The interactions between characters are extremely entertaining. This book will captivate everyone who reads it. Recommended to everybody."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Control me

"I really like this story. It’s interesting, well-written and the characters are fun to read about. It has humor, sarcasm and well-thought serious moments. Recommend to all."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Gri

"I really like this book and I would love to recommend it to my friend's "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Control Me

"Very cute story, spicy as well. But some parts are missing details that the reader needs to follow the story. Like how he nibbled her ear although she is lying on the floor, and he is on the bed. Also, some vocabulary changes could be nice. The word "erect" was used back to back a lot in chapter 3 or 4 Still a lovely story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Jane

"I really enjoyed the book.It has a good plot and also the author has an amazing writing skill"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
:))))))))))

"Wish there would be more tension between the two ex bffs- not like sexual tension bc theres enough of that but like tension due to their new found unfamiliarity with not having seen each fir many years and so theyre both lowkey awkward and dont know how to register each other mature selves (especially their looks👀🤪) "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Like the story

"Like the story "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Need more heat... More steamy... Turn up the heat!!

"Need more heat... More steamy... Turn up the heat!! "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation