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Good Job!

"The story is good, it really is my type of style of writing and it sparks some inspiration for myself to start writing again. From what I've read so far, I can't wait to see where this story goes!"

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Good so far!

"Anxiously waiting for more!"

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Such a lovely read so far!

"I am absolutely in love with the turmoil the main character is going through. Well, that may be mean, but I enjoy how it opens up a place for Jaime to come in. In addition, though the book says DDLG is included, I haven’t seen it as of chapter 5. However, I prefer this approach as it means it has the potential of being a slow (maybe) romance, which I much prefer. So many DDLG novels are meet, love and spank by chapter 3. I will enjoy reading the novel as chapters come out and see how the main character Delilah works through her difficulties "

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Great

"Really good book. Very interesting "

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Delicate

"This is A Great Start To one Amazing Book!! Just wished it was Much longer! This Author is One Amazing Writer!! "

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Delicate

"Nice update next chapter thanks"

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An Unappreciated Work of Art

"I love the authors writing style and how they present every character and issue. I hope you continue writing this, I can’t wait to see where it goes. "

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