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What is your opinion?
A great start to an epic tale
"I've only gotten to read the first story in this series, but I'm immensely interested in Elianna's story and the fantasy and mystery that surrounds her. Beautiful and haunting imagery, a natural narrative, and memorable characters punctuate this short story. Highly recommend. And an aside, I hope Taryn returns at some point in the future. I adored him."
Love the storyline
"This is a really good story. I'm intrigued by the storyline and the characters. Pastor Mercy and Tyran strong and I hope we see them again. I enjoy the writing style but need quotation marks to help me follow the dialog. I also would like to know what Elianna looks like. Is she tall, petite, etc. I am looking forward to the next chapter of Elianna's adventure!"
