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Wonderful short story!

"What a wonderful, hot story. Makes me wish it could actually happen. Warm, sexy, tender, raw. This story has it all. A few typos, but not enough to interrupt the flow."

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Anu

1 chapters read

Another chance

"Well written had me gripped to the end specially the part in the bed room the threesome with the ladies doing each other"

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suzywoo386

1 chapters read

Another chance

"I really enjoyed this short story love your characters and the hot stuff, would have loved to have read more x"

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Another Chance

"Excellent story line and written so well"

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kenju99

1 chapters read

Another Chance

"It’s so hot! "

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karynb1245

1 chapters read

Jordan and Hillary

"I think this a good story, very exciting "

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Another Chance

"Good read, however would have liked more description on what the women did together while with Hugh. Perhaps more intimacy between them. They don't strike me as being into each other for some reason."

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So good.

"I'm one of those people who fixate on grammar. I know... I know! you hate me. Sorry. However despite needing to be edited this is actually a really good piece of work. The author is definitely talented. I loved this."

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2jlynn

1 chapters read

Where do I find my older guy??

"WOW!! They have the perfect give and take relationship. Perfection in every way... where do you find this in today's society?"

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Awesome

"The build up was a little long, but worth it"

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Anna2020

1 chapters read

Another Chance ❤❤

"Great story, excellent description of a relationship, the details were accurate, I really enjoyed reading this story ❤❤❤"

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Another Chance

"Gee whiz!! Things moved fast 😳 😁😁. Now he can tell his daughter he is going out....get laid and a workout!!"

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MelX

0 chapters read

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"Amazing, sensual, and unexpected. As a woman, I loved having the story being told from a male perspective, strong and smart women, loved their friendship and the reassurance they gave to one another. Lucky Hugh!"

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Amazing

"Well-written. Great characters."

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Elizabeth

1 chapters read

Friends with benefits

"Hot! Hot! Hot"

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Damn

"That was amazing "

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Saavikam17

1 chapters read

Gripping tale!

"This feels like a great first chapter to a longer tale"

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Pearl

0 chapters read

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"This story is fucking interesting. So romantic, but least Hugh could have chosen one amongst them. It also gives pleasure...but in all it is a beautiful story"

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MiaCara20

1 chapters read

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"OMG the sex scene was soo soo hot. Thoroughly enjoyed it, a well written stort."

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Another Chance

"I am expecting the male character to suddenly shake his head rub his hair and sit up in his lounge chair with a smile on his face and a "WOW" ON HIS LIPS....AND SAY that's even better than this mornings episode "

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