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Mind Puzzler

"Interesting fantasy with magical creatures and elements. 🤔 Bit of a mind puzzle as some parts of the story don't make sense. Then you catch up with what's happening shortly after. There's no clear Journey of the characters and questions are unanswered. More clarity into what the actual themes of this story would help in the vague description of what this story is about. 🤔 A sequel would help tie up loose ends and answer what's missing in this book. Still I enjoyed a different read there's substance here just need to sift through it. "

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Dunno

"I dont really understand it. It could be a good one but the storyline is not clear at all. Duh. Perhaps i am too stupid to understand it"

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