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Yessir

"WOW- This is great! I think its really cute, I'm writing a zodiac story myself and i like seeing other people's perspectives of the signs it just helps me personally. But keep up the good work! I 'll make sure to kep[ up with this story!"

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Pretty good

"I found this story to be quite entertaining and intriguing despite it lacking in some things I personally find e enjoyable in any story. For instance, I couldn't identify what the whole point of the story was because the plot of the story is unclear. Second, the characters seemed very two-dimensional and there was no depth to their personas other then the obvious facts that characters each personality beneath each sign. Third, the daily lives of the characters and who they are as people were almost nonexistent. Who they are, what they do, when this story is taking place, where these characters live, how they got their powers in the first place, and why they think, say, and do what they do is unexplained which makes the reader wonder why they even bothered reading in the first place. Lack of descriptions and details also bothered me when I read this. BUT I assume that this story wasn't suppose to be like a novel or anything like that. It has a fun, happy vibe to it that I found to be very pleasing and easy on the mind. Very well done my friend. I enjoyed this write. Happy writing!"

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