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Love it!

"Loving this story! These two are just the cutest!"

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Cute

"Super cute 🥰 "

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Pleassseeeee

"I REALLLYENJOYED THIS BOOK EVEN IF IT WAS SHORT. DO YOU THIMK YOU'LL DO A SECOND PART PRETTY PLEASE WITH 🍒 on top"

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Brilliant

"Such a great read. You do a fantastic job of establishing dramatic suspense and I adore the bond between Jack and Ariella. His pursuits are such a tease! The writing style is also top-notch and the plot unfolds effortlessly."

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Ceasefire

"The story is compelling. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Great story

"It’s was a great story love and drama. Straight to the point and not over doing it. Didn’t see any typos either 😉."

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Ceasefire

"Cute story 💛🧡."

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Cute

"This was a cue story "

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Ceasefire

"Omg!!! I just couldn't get enough of this story. I loved Jax's persistence and determination and Ariella's quirkiness, stubborn and independence!! I couldn't believe it really ended! Great work totally recommendable for read!✨✨"

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Ceasefire causes more fires lol

"I liked the whole concept of this book, as well as attention to the perspectives of the characters. It was very refreshing and different for me. I liked the character development and the descriptive views of of the settings as well as how the characters are introduced. I glad to see how the many character relationships have been developed. It had me one moment cheerful, then at dismay. The moment of passion surprised me yet looking back at the progression of the story, i should have realized. I have improved my previous rating due to further developments yet the touch and go feel for some characters, i can appreciate. All and all, a fine love story, will make you eager to curl up and read with your coffee."

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Masked feelingsⁿ

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Increase

"I dislike the concert of friends fighting"

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