What is your opinion?
Reads like a flashback
"I read the second novel first, then backtracked to the first. These two books are a strange read. For the most part it seems the characters meet each other in book two for the first time, yet in the first book they are all friends. Which is why I thought this read like a flashback. Yet there are elements that read as first contact between the characters. Either way, you don't lose anything reading either of them first. The FL is a tough, driven, determined character who is recovering from a horrific event orchestrated by her father and supposed best friend. You learn more about this event and the aftereffects later on in book 1, but the end is satisfying. The other characters are well thought out, seemed to be given a solid backstory, and work well together. I can't say the end goal is transparent at the beginning, but at the midway point you know where they are headed. Yet it doesn't diminish the story to know that. There are still moving parts to be figured out, obstacles to overcome, and some ways to go to get there. In the end the conclusion doesn't happen where you think it will and that by itself is a nice surprise. Enjoy the read. "
Good story line
"I’m liking the suspense so far and wondering if there is a love story behind it all."
Too tipsy book 1
"Notwithstanding the subject matter, this was a wholesome book. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more from Someone.i just wanted to see what happens next all the time."
Too tipsy book 1
"Notwithstanding the subject matter, this was a wholesome book. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more from Someone.i just wanted to see what happens next all the time."
Good read
"This was a good book. Thank you "
LOVE
"I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT it might have been short but it seemed long with the details and I loved the story line and characters thank you for writing it! ♥️♥️"
Too tipsy 1
"I enjoyed that story. Great work on the narratives thank you. "
too tipsy
"hey!, Although the story was short but yet gave the rollercoaster ride. I liked ur style because it was soo different from the other action stories i read, but plz. add a little more adrenaline rush , means add a little more detail in action, it was a good rollercoaster of humor. I hope you make more stories like this and plz. make the story/chapters long and suspenseful . Last but not the least i appreciate ur work and efforts , as being an artist helps u to feel other's efforts and pain. well as that being said u can also check my instagram account @artattack2004 . thank you for taking ur time to write a story for us to remember. Sorry if its too long but i really appreciate ur efforts."
Xérès Éveillé
"The concept of this story is interesting and different from the norm. This book was a pleasant read."
To Tipsy
"Great storyline. Looking forward to see how the book ends."
