I totally like the way this is going.

"This is really amazing, the way you make it feel so real. The last part in the 2nd chapter, I read it twice trying to put myself in Scar's shoe, to try and figure out what she noticed. I dunno if i got it right, but I won't say anything, in case I'm right, I'll tell in the next chapter. I suggest this story to all Mystery/ Thriller and Romance lovers. Stay safe."