Mind Magic Robo by JackWhite083 at Inkitt
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Mind Magic Robo

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Summary

Sak can control robots with mana! He must leave his tropical home and travel the world fighting fellow mana users to save his friend!

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Great Manic-Tournament.

Sak can control his robot with the magic of his mind. Sack is 16 years old; he has dark brown hair and a cunning mind. His robot is called Rome. Rome is a 6-foot, bulky robot in a somewhat humanoid shape. His skin is made of shimmering silver, he has glass eyes that can change color on a whim, depending on Sak’s emotions.

Sak was training in the tropical plains of his home island, Copec, when he got a call on his phone that informed him that he got an invitation to the great Braku tournament. The great braku tournament was a large tournament where all the manics (those who use magic) will compete for a chance to join an elite group of manics called the sea-stars.

After getting the news, Sak and Rome ran home to their house in the nearby village. For most of his life, Sak lived in an orphanage, but when he was 13, he saw a meteor fall down from the sky, and inside the meteor was Rome. Then, the local manic taught Sak how to use mind magic for about a year. By the time he was 14, Sak could completely control Rome and speak to Rome through his mind. For years Sak did jobs for the king of Copec like clearing bandit forts and finding missing persons, all while using Rome’s power.

By the time Sak was 16, he had enough money to move out of the orphanage and into a hut on the beach opposite the local town. As soon as Sak got into his house he started packing his bags. Sak was going to miss the beach trees and sandy shores of Copec but he new he was ready to move on and fight in the great manic tournament.

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