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Do You Love Me (Unedited)

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Summary

“Do. You. Love. ME....” the deep baritone voice huskily whispered, goosebumps wash over my body, my neck tingles with electricity from the warmth that not only the words create but of the breathy tickle. That sensual deep voice appears, and I find myself tilting my head to the side, in anticipation for a set of teeth to scrape my earlobe or warm, firm lips to caress my neck. Yet there is never anyone around, no one to have caused that breathy warmth on my neck, always just below my right ear lobe. I shudder to myself as I think of how much I wish that voice was real. This can not be a figment of my imagination, can it? A/N this story is steamy and verges on erotica over romance (you have been warned), not suited for those looking for a story containing longing looks, soft caresses, or those under 18-years-old. Also contains mythical creatures, so has a fantasy element to it. I hope you enjoy it, please feel free to comment.

Status
Complete
Chapters
65
Rating
4.8 22 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Blurb

“Do. You. Love. ME...” The deep baritone voice huskily whispered. Goosebumps pepper my body. My neck tingles with electricity, elicited by the warmth that the words create within me and from that breathy tickle.

That deep sensual voice appears just as fast as it disappears. I find myself tilting my head to the side in anticipation. Waiting for a set of teeth to nip and scrape the tender skin of my throat. Perhaps nibble at my ear lobe, or place a trail of warm, firm yet sensual kisses down the column of my neck, tracking across my collarbone.

Yet there is never anyone around. No one to have caused that breathy warmth on my neck. That warmth seems to appear just below my right ear lobe. I shudder thinking of how much I wish that voice were real. This can not be a figment of my imagination, can it?

Unbeknownst to Becca, she is about to be thrust into the supernatural world. Until this husky, demanding, masculine voice showed up, Becca was none the wiser to the potential of their existence. She never realized how close the supernatural world has been to her, day-to-day, hour-to-hour, minute-to-minute.

Even now, the poor lass considers she may be going crazy.

A/N - The story is far steamier than initially intended, verging on and crossing into erotica (you have been warned). This story is not suited to those looking for unrequited longing looks and soft caresses and is not intended for anyone under 18 years old.

Would you mind commenting as you read along? I like to hear and know your thoughts on the story's progress. Reviews are also greatly appreciated if you get the time.

Happy Reading xx

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freaking LOVE this story! Hopeful there is a second book]

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we’ll this intro is intriguing! which is all I need to get me to the next chapter 😍

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Do You Love Me (Unedited)