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"I loved the story and the plot! Just Goosebumps! I love the way who Angelie was showing her dark side by torturing the betrayer. And Lorenzo? CHEFS KISS! He is every girls dream husband and boyfriend."

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The mafia lady

"I liked the story but end was bit terrible. She could have taken the revenge by killing his dad and not Zeo 😔"

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Omg wow......

"My godd...... What a storyline..... Full of climax scenes.... The novel was lit...."

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Nice plot

"The plot of the story was interesting and the end was even more surprising. The characters are well portrayed and the story makes you wanna know about them more and more. The writing pace was smooth and made me felt as if I was in the story experiencing everything. I loved the book and can't wait to complete the book two soon."

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Nice story lines

"I like this story line"

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The Mafia Lady

"Love the book will the waiting the book 2"

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Excellent

"I love this book and the author has great writing skills. I would highly recommend. "

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Book

"Very good book "

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Great story line!

"Loving the story line, some of the grammer an sentence structure could use a proof edit but Im liking it!"

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Story is a blast

"This story is awsm i have read it and liked it .Nothing to say more ,just read it "

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Ok ok

"It's too rushed off till now of what I read..I think it will be good"

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Good

"Sweet 😊 Angela is she going to take revenge on Zoe’s father after killing her parents?? "

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Unexpected ENDING

"Can't believe how the story ended but it already explains when we first look at the cover. Its too much heart breaking. But i really liked your book. Thank you Author for the book. 💝💛💚"

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