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writting skills

"I really loved this story and I enjoyed it a lot and where did the idea to write this story and are you working on any new stuff "

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The Topazian Queen Approves!

"This is better than most books I have read. It's easy to follow the plot. Your proper grammar and punctuation is my cup of tea. There's not a lot of books that are this good so I was pretty surprised. Kudos to you."

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Worth A Read

"The concept of having a "full heaven" was very interesting. The narrator's voice sounds kind of dreary though, but I suppose it sets the tone. The descriptions were a little basic, not much flair, but at least I can conjure up some imagined setting. The story just has enough good twists and turns but the atmosphere and the way it is written makes me feel like it was a bit rushed. Overall, a good book with only some minor issues. "

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