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What is your opinion?
Needs work...
"I kind of get the plot of the story but it can be super messy. I did not understand what was happening most of the time, and when I did, there were grammar errors that made it difficult to read again. Some scenes made me feel very uncomfortable. Some of the characters, like Gina, are too bland and I really could not keep up with who she was. Overall, I didn't enjoy reading this... but it needs a lot of work with grammar and story structure."
Ok so far
"We need to go back to look at the "touch my hair" part, there's a bit of grammar errors. Also, wtf is my plot. This is a published book now, it needs to have some direction. There are 12 chapters for goodness sake, let's have done direction geez. "
