What is your opinion?
Amazing
"I love the flow, the story , the plot everything about this book! I'm hooked!🤩"
A Really Great Mystery
"I really like this story. The writing sucks you in and before you know it you are clicking next. There were a few places where the dialogue was a bit choppy, but overall it is a great mystery story. I would definitely recommend this."
Didn't put my phone down for a second
"I very much enjoyed reading this story. I didn't put my phone down once. The story flowed very well and the plot draws you in. The world building was very well done, it made you feel like apart of the books world. It takes a great writer to achieve that. "
A lot of potential
"Not a bad, but feels like a rough draft. I recommend some more editing. There are words missing in sentences, misspellings, and parts where the story shifts between present and past tense. Unfortunately it's distracting and I was frequently broken out of the story. The main idea is good! For a mystery, though, it was a little too predictable. I pieced together everything rather quickly. I would suggest adding a few curve balls to throw the reader off guard and suspect the wrong characters. "
