What is your opinion?
Awesome
"i liked it a lot and i wish there will be further more updates and Punctuation,Grammar etc, are pretty much good. love it"
Good
"Plot is already known. The author has given nice abilities to the main character. Yet, I would suggest to explore the MC more. Keep it up.. I'm thrilled."
The Younger Sister of Kakashi Hatake
"While I liked the story idea and basis for it, there are a lot of, for lack of a better word, issues. To begin with I like the character you created and their interactions with the other characters, however, you miss a lot of great opportunities to show off your character's strength, skills, personality, and fighting style. Another thing your perspective jump around alot, so much so that it makes the story feel disjointed abd choppy. When switch perspectives it also isn't labeled real clearly most of the time making it difficult to keep track of what character view you're reading. I realize that most people who read this have seen Naruto the series, but you skip over important events and details thus making it confusing even for someone who has watched Naruto. You also have a lot of mixed up, missing, and misspelled words my advice for that run a spell check in whatever program you use to write and then run it through a secondary program to check it again. I figure you still wanted to keep most of the focus in the story on Naruto because he is the main character of the series, but instead down playing and skipping around what your character is doing you could have incorporated them into to the different scenes, even if they're just a bystander."
