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The Mental Prison

"What I liked about the story was the plot, character development and story structure because I can somewhat relate to the main character. keep up the good work. this story is really good although i did laugh when he put his mother's photo downward so he didn't have to get an image of his mother's judging eyes while he jacked off 😂."

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