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Secret Feelings...

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Summary

Hey everyone, I am not a poet but tried to be one. I have only wrote this poem in the memory of my late big grandfather who recently left us. Secret Feelings are his feelings, he was suffering from a disorder called hallucinations. So, I wrote on one of the scene in it. Hope you'll like it. I really did my best in this, but if there's anything, which is incorrect, please do tell me in the comments. It will really mean a lot. -thank you very much for at least giving my first poem a try. ❤

Genre
Poetry/Other
Author
Anshita
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.8 5 reviews
Age Rating
16+

Secret Feelings

Below a sky as a blue ocean, there's a concrete road and buses traveling on it,

To go to my hometown which is far a bit.

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Familiar voices calling, 'MAHAVIR' my name,


But I miserably fail to send signals to my brain.


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Because....


Because, the image I am watching disappears and Now I sees an empty wall,


I let those salty droplets fall..


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When I realize, what I've seen,


It made my heart broken as it was just a Deja Vu dream.


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Lying on a bed is like an icy snow,


Remembering about non-existing people feels like a reality show.


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Feeling tiredness and numbness,


I close my eyes to relax but sees only darkness.


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Because....


Because, I wasn't a loser, but my body gave up after living so long,

Even in the heaven, I can still hear my family singing a ritual song.

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My ashes are only left;

On which later God will take control,

But my love will never end for all...

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"Because, the image I am watching disappears and now I see an empty..."

6 years
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"When I realize, what I've seen,                                                                                    It broke my heart like a Deja Vu dream."

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The above comment is a suggestion. I tried to balance out the stanzas as much as could.....

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