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Addition of you

"Loved reading Taylor & Chelsea's story! A great companion read to the Sum of us!"

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Good read

"I read both Sum of us And Addition of you. I liked both. Poppy is one of my favorite character. You write the story with so much details, so one thing that I couldn't agree with is in both stories the core reason "The break up of Rhys and Poppy" has not received the detailed explanation. In one chapter it is told that Rhys received a different contract, label can decide who he can associate with, Rhys never wanted Poppy in his mess and he broke up. As per Rhys character breaking up with Poppy is not a decision can be taken over night, he might have gone through so much mental agony before taking this decision. He took the decision without consultation with Taylor. The details such as how George/label started blackmailing Rhys and eventually he took the decision to break up with Poppy should have been explained in detail. That might have made the story better. Thank you so much for sharing the story. Keep writing. "

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The Sum of Us

"What a fantastic book. I loved the fast, witty somewhat confusing manner it was written, as it reflects the realness! The overthinking and scattered thought processes really resonated with me! Great work! "

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I want a printed copy.

"I fell in love with Ths Sum of Us a couple of years ago when I found it on another platform. It was removed, so I searched where to locate it. Obviously, I found it here. Much to my surprise, I learned there was a companion story. Without hesitation, I saved it and started reading as soon as I could. The 2 books have quickly wormed their way into being favorites of mine (I blame Harper.) and as an avid reader; that's saying something. I want both books in printed form. This was the story I didn't know I needed. I personally was diagnosed as bipolar years ago. Though I'm not sure if I was properly diagnosed, I'm currently going through a process. It's nice to read a story well written that gives a good description of living with disorders. Thank you Erin for writing this. ❣️"

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The Addition of You

"I truly loved reading both books of this series (I honestly read all of your books). I love your writing style honestly. I understand second-guessing yourself, especially after being diagnosed with a disability. Personally, I have my own disabilities but what I loved was Taylor. Before you even made a chapter on him having autism I saw it through the development of his character in the sum of us. I guess it's because my husband and my son are both autistic. It was awesome and amazing to read a true book of what someone with autism goes through and their personality. So many people I run I to think they are cold, unfeeling and a burden to be around. I think that they see the world differently, and I find my disabilities mix well with theirs. So reading your books and especially this one. You did an amazing job!! One thing I learned is that people who do not like these type of books are the ones to criticize, which are the ones that have no disability themselves, and they think they know more than you. I look forward to more of your books. Don't let other criticism get to you, and I know that can be hard, but remember you did it. You know how hard it was, but you did it. I hope you continue writing. It's truly honestly well written, thought out, and you can see the hard work you put into it. Good luck!!"

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Sea & Sailor

"The best story I’ve read in a long time. The characters are flawed and that’s what makes you fall in love with them. Sea & Sailor are perfectly imperfect. "

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Chills, Tears, Perfection

"They are soooo perfect 🥰. Thank you for the update."

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The Addition of You

"I thought I wouldn’t like this book because Taylor wasn’t always my cup of tea in the sum of us but reading it now and getting a more detailed character for Taylor, I  absolutely love this book as far!!  I also love how his and Chelsea’s relationship is developing as well!! "

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I cried

"I feel this more than poppy and Rhys story"

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The Addition of You

"The book is awesome. Everything about it is so good. I am so glad I saw it on inkitt.❤️ Hope to read more soon"

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Amazing

"I love this book so far! Cant wait to read more!"

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The Addition of You

"I am really enjoying this sequel to the book, The Sum of Us. The author has a great sense of humor and knowledge of pop culture. The characters are dimensional. I would buy both books if they were paper published. "

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The Addition of You

"I'm happy that Taylor finally knows about Chelsea's situation despite how it unfolded. I want them to leave the past behind and realise that they are good for each other. "

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Amazing!!

"Can't say enough about these characters and their development. The author's depiction is extremely vivid. Advice to readers read book one first, both stories are interrelated."

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I want more

"Please update soon:"

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Loving it 💜

"Watching the story happen from a different perspective is enlightening. I loved the original and this is only adding more characters to my heart. "

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The Addition of you

"Great story!!"

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Addition

"Amazing story from and amazing Writer 😁cant. wait to see, how it ends e"

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The addition of you

" How often does this author update?"

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Wonderful read that compliments Sum of Us

"Having read Sum of Us, and thoroughly enjoyed it, this story compliments it by giving two different points of view. I fell in love with Rhys and Poppy and I'm falling in love with Taylor and Chelsea. I feel like I'm living their story alongside them. Really well written with humour that matches my own."

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