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Perfect

"My favourite story so far. My favourite thing about this story is that the author gives a different side of the plot that we haven't seen in the movie/book. I absolutely love the plot and the author's style of writing. I recommend this book to every divergent fan out there. "

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Unexpected

"No words can explain how amazing this story is. I love it so much. With Eric hurting because he is lieing. It is like heart breaking that all might Eric crys. I love this fanfiction. I used to hate Eric but wow you made me love him in just one day! I am amazed. You are a fricken amazing writer and if I don't see your name on a book in the future I will be very upset by that. So yeah that is how much I loved this story."

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Interesting OC

"Well rounded OC main character- No Mary Sues here! Watching Alyssa grow is interesting and her reactions to situations are realistic."

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