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Grewt story pleasss update

"This is amazing pleassssssss update "

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The Alpha's Kitten

"I love this book I recommended it to my bestie I love the way the author wrote the book And I feel like authors should be encouraged to write more"

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Awesome

"Loved story can’t wait to read more "

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Good writing

"I really am enjoying this story so far, can’t wait to read on. I really Love Cedrics character, he sounds so cute and sweet. I think that the reason why they are all protective of him is that he is the Alphas mate. And I can’t wait to find out."

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Love it !!

"He is sooo sweet and adorable 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 so sweeet!!! That is such a good book, please continue it 🙈😍😍"

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Shifter

"I really am enjoying the story the writers very creative and makes it fun to read"

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The Alpha's Kitten

"I absolutely adore the characters "

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Ydydy

"Bdhdbbd bdhd bdhdh"

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The Alpha's Kitten

"This book is phenomenal! I just read it all at once and I really hope it gets updated soon!"

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You should make a part 2

"I love this a lot and I wish it was way longer you should totally make it longer or make a part 2 If you could I was just wondering"

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Good job

"I really liked it ,well done"

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5 star review on everything

"OMG i am MELTING because of this book, keep on writing! It's soo good, a very nice story. I hope you'll write more chapters! "

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Engaging

"I like the storyline of different animals and the different dynamics. I would like to understand how the plot thickens a bit more quickly. "

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Very nice! :3

"I like the story very much :3 I hope you keep it up. I'm looking forward to it. Its still the very beginning but already very good. I hope with time and every future chapter it gets more in depth and details. So maybe the time skips could be less. 😉 "

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Good but could be better

"The story has a good plot and I can see that this will be very successful but it feels like this was written by a 6th grader with no real writing experience. There is so much happening so fast and the main character is 19 not 10 there is no need to have him act 10 years old. I get if you want to make him come off as younger but it is way too much."

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Love

"Please continue writing this story; I like reading it. I want to know more about the characters and the plot.Thanks for starting it in the first place. 😁 I apologize if this is overbearing or rude ."

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Conversation could be a bit clearer😁

"I feel like it is an amazing story but the conversation aspect is really hard to keep up with it is hard to determine who is speaking sometimes."

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